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Thursday 9 May 2013

Desk Inspection


“Desk inspection before lunch!”
As the ancient desk creaked open
It was shocking to see
what I happened upon
a humongous rat
staring right back at me.
Once everyone saw it they
ran and screamed in terror.
Nobody realised that the toxic rat
was made of coloured rubber.
So I put it in my pocket
for another day,
when the rat would come in handy,
to scare my friends, laugh with them.
Oh boy, that would be dandy!

1 comment:

  1. Hi Michael

    I like the language features used in this. The rhymes were amazing. This post is the best post I've seen in a long time. Keep up the awesome work

    Jacob

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